Well, first, I love it being in Canary Wharf. The opening scene with the capture on broomsticks was exciting and vivid. Really nicely done.
The first two pieces of art were lovely to see, again, and I particularly love the use of colour.
The next thing to really make me hold my breath was the winking Sirius. I LOVE his hair and his general sauciness.
Harry and Malfoy having breakfast is fabulous. And my favourite line so far, sorry, but I do love a gag:: Ron made a hand gesture that indicated he considered Malfoy a keen seeker of masturbatory pleasures instead. :DD
The picture of Harry helping with Malfoy's things is swoonworthy. I am totally leching at all the uniforms and suits. Oh my. Draco's cheekbones look as if they could injure somebody in this drawing. HIs eye... his arse... I can't breathe. Harry is SO HANDSOME. You always draw his glasses so nicely! Anyway, they look amazing, with the contrasts of colour in their hair and clothes. Just a stunning image.
All the details about their work, their equipment, how they interact with the Muggle world, etc, are wonderful. The talk about clothes and Malfoy's silk embroidery is making me VERY happy.
The art of the shed is gorgeous with the little touches such as the flowers and the bird, and Draco's foot leaving the frame. I don't think I've seen you draw Draco's hair so white before - I'm really liking that look.
I love Bustament's account of the explosion and how he remembered every detail after so many years. The way the story slots into canon is very nicely done. I love the stoicism of the victims and bystanders. It felt very British to me, and of a bygone age in a way.
The rest of this part was too exciting to stop and make comments on, but I can't wait to see what happens next, PLUS, loved the ending. What a joy! Congratulations to EVERYONE involved with this as I know there are many of you. It's a delight to read and look at, and I can see already that this is going to be one of those stories that is full of details that become part of one's head canon. On to the next part! Hoorah!
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Date: 2013-09-06 08:15 pm (UTC)Well, first, I love it being in Canary Wharf. The opening scene with the capture on broomsticks was exciting and vivid. Really nicely done.
The first two pieces of art were lovely to see, again, and I particularly love the use of colour.
The next thing to really make me hold my breath was the winking Sirius. I LOVE his hair and his general sauciness.
Harry and Malfoy having breakfast is fabulous. And my favourite line so far, sorry, but I do love a gag:: Ron made a hand gesture that indicated he considered Malfoy a keen seeker of masturbatory pleasures instead. :DD
The picture of Harry helping with Malfoy's things is swoonworthy. I am totally leching at all the uniforms and suits. Oh my. Draco's cheekbones look as if they could injure somebody in this drawing. HIs eye... his arse... I can't breathe. Harry is SO HANDSOME. You always draw his glasses so nicely! Anyway, they look amazing, with the contrasts of colour in their hair and clothes. Just a stunning image.
All the details about their work, their equipment, how they interact with the Muggle world, etc, are wonderful. The talk about clothes and Malfoy's silk embroidery is making me VERY happy.
The art of the shed is gorgeous with the little touches such as the flowers and the bird, and Draco's foot leaving the frame. I don't think I've seen you draw Draco's hair so white before - I'm really liking that look.
I love Bustament's account of the explosion and how he remembered every detail after so many years. The way the story slots into canon is very nicely done. I love the stoicism of the victims and bystanders. It felt very British to me, and of a bygone age in a way.
The rest of this part was too exciting to stop and make comments on, but I can't wait to see what happens next, PLUS, loved the ending. What a joy! Congratulations to EVERYONE involved with this as I know there are many of you. It's a delight to read and look at, and I can see already that this is going to be one of those stories that is full of details that become part of one's head canon. On to the next part! Hoorah!